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    Poetry

    No, not gay. nttiawwt. But find it interesting how sometimes fewer words can say much more. A recent find, feel free to add on or flame away.

    Mameen

    Be infinitessimal under that sky, a creature
    even the sailing hawk misses, a wraith
    among the rocks where the mist parts slowly.
    Recall the way mere mortals are overwhelmed
    by circumstance, how great reputations
    dssolve with infirmity and how you,
    in particular, live a hairsbreadth from losing
    everyone you hold dear.

    Then, look back down the path as if seeing
    your past and then south over the hazy blue
    coast as if present to a wide future.
    Remember the way you are all possibilities
    you can see and how you live best
    as an appreciator of horizons,
    whether you reach them or not.
    Admit that once you have got up
    from your chair and opened the door,
    once you have walked out into the clean air
    toward that edge and taken the path up high
    beyond the ordinary, you have become
    the privileged and the pilgrim,
    the one who will tell the story
    and the one, coming back
    from the mountain,
    who helped to make it.



    -- David Whyte
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    Something about the wrinkle in your forehead tells me there's a fit about to get thrown
    And I never hear a single word you say when you tell me not to have my fun
    It's the same old shit that I ain't gonna take off anyone.
    and I never had a shortage of people tryin' to warn me about the dangers I pose to myself.

    Patterson Hood of the DBT's

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    I've been a big fan of poetry for a long, long time. Over the years I really got into slam poets. I really have found more profound feeling in short bodies of work than long. So here are 3 such examples by 2 different non-traditional poets I have come to appreciate.





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    life is fine

    i went down to the river
    set down on the bank
    tried to think but couldn't
    so i jumped in an sank

    came up once and hollered
    came up twice and cried
    if the water hadn't been so cold
    would have sunk and died

    but it was cold, cold in that water

    i took the elevator
    16 floors above the ground
    thought about my baby
    and thought i might jump down

    i stood there and hollered
    i stood there and cried
    if it hadn't been so high
    i might have jumped and died

    but it was high, high up there, it was high

    well since i'm still here living
    i guess i will live on
    i could have died for love
    but for livin i was born

    though you may hear me holler
    and you may see me cry
    i'll be dogged sweat baby
    if you're gonna see me die

    life is fine, fine as wine, life is fine

    -Langston Hughes

    i probably messed that up a bit as it is from memory - google be damned.

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    The Cremation of Sam McGee
    BY ROBERT W. SERVICE


    There are strange things done in the midnight sun
    By the men who moil for gold;
    The Arctic trails have their secret tales
    That would make your blood run cold;
    The Northern Lights have seen queer sights,
    But the queerest they ever did see
    Was that night on the marge of Lake Lebarge
    I cremated Sam McGee.

    Now Sam McGee was from Tennessee, where the cotton blooms and blows.
    Why he left his home in the South to roam 'round the Pole, God only knows.
    He was always cold, but the land of gold seemed to hold him like a spell;
    Though he'd often say in his homely way that "he'd sooner live in hell."

    On a Christmas Day we were mushing our way over the Dawson trail.
    Talk of your cold! through the parka's fold it stabbed like a driven nail.
    If our eyes we'd close, then the lashes froze till sometimes we couldn't see;
    It wasn't much fun, but the only one to whimper was Sam McGee.

    And that very night, as we lay packed tight in our robes beneath the snow,
    And the dogs were fed, and the stars o'erhead were dancing heel and toe,
    He turned to me, and "Cap," says he, "I'll cash in this trip, I guess;
    And if I do, I'm asking that you won't refuse my last request."

    Well, he seemed so low that I couldn't say no; then he says with a sort of moan:
    "It's the cursèd cold, and it's got right hold till I'm chilled clean through to the bone.
    Yet 'tain't being dead—it's my awful dread of the icy grave that pains;
    So I want you to swear that, foul or fair, you'll cremate my last remains."

    A pal's last need is a thing to heed, so I swore I would not fail;
    And we started on at the streak of dawn; but God! he looked ghastly pale.
    He crouched on the sleigh, and he raved all day of his home in Tennessee;
    And before nightfall a corpse was all that was left of Sam McGee.

    There wasn't a breath in that land of death, and I hurried, horror-driven,
    With a corpse half hid that I couldn't get rid, because of a promise given;
    It was lashed to the sleigh, and it seemed to say: "You may tax your brawn and brains,
    But you promised true, and it's up to you to cremate those last remains."

    Now a promise made is a debt unpaid, and the trail has its own stern code.
    In the days to come, though my lips were dumb, in my heart how I cursed that load.
    In the long, long night, by the lone firelight, while the huskies, round in a ring,
    Howled out their woes to the homeless snows— O God! how I loathed the thing.

    And every day that quiet clay seemed to heavy and heavier grow;
    And on I went, though the dogs were spent and the grub was getting low;
    The trail was bad, and I felt half mad, but I swore I would not give in;
    And I'd often sing to the hateful thing, and it hearkened with a grin.

    Till I came to the marge of Lake Lebarge, and a derelict there lay;
    It was jammed in the ice, but I saw in a trice it was called the "Alice May."
    And I looked at it, and I thought a bit, and I looked at my frozen chum;
    Then "Here," said I, with a sudden cry, "is my cre-ma-tor-eum."

    Some planks I tore from the cabin floor, and I lit the boiler fire;
    Some coal I found that was lying around, and I heaped the fuel higher;
    The flames just soared, and the furnace roared—such a blaze you seldom see;
    And I burrowed a hole in the glowing coal, and I stuffed in Sam McGee.

    Then I made a hike, for I didn't like to hear him sizzle so;
    And the heavens scowled, and the huskies howled, and the wind began to blow.
    It was icy cold, but the hot sweat rolled down my cheeks, and I don't know why;
    And the greasy smoke in an inky cloak went streaking down the sky.

    I do not know how long in the snow I wrestled with grisly fear;
    But the stars came out and they danced about ere again I ventured near;
    I was sick with dread, but I bravely said: "I'll just take a peep inside.
    I guess he's cooked, and it's time I looked"; ... then the door I opened wide.

    And there sat Sam, looking cool and calm, in the heart of the furnace roar;
    And he wore a smile you could see a mile, and he said: "Please close that door.
    It's fine in here, but I greatly fear you'll let in the cold and storm—
    Since I left Plumtree, down in Tennessee, it's the first time I've been warm."

    There are strange things done in the midnight sun
    By the men who moil for gold;
    The Arctic trails have their secret tales
    That would make your blood run cold;
    The Northern Lights have seen queer sights,
    But the queerest they ever did see
    Was that night on the marge of Lake Lebarge
    I cremated Sam McGee.

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    RIP SAMMY

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    here i sit,
    broken-hearted,
    tried to shit,
    but only farted.

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    ^^^^^^ &&&&&&&& than IIIIIIIIIIIII
    sotic chal and depr is
    lost & found
    let the light out
    BROO

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    no gras in jack
    6 tus 12
    habds make me rush
    2 stops on a tram

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    If your officer's dead and the sergeants look white,
    Remember it's ruin to run from a fight:
    So take open order, lie down, and sit tight,
    And wait for supports like a soldier.

    When you're wounded and left on Afghanistan's plains,
    And the women come out to cut up what remains,
    Jest roll to your rifle and blow out your brains
    An' go to your God like a soldier.

    Kipling, 1895

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    IS GAY


    Just kidding fuckers
    Live Hard

    "When the Government fears the People there is Liberty, When the People fear the Government, there is Tyranny." - Thomas Jefferson

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    Quote Originally Posted by Crampedon View Post
    The Cremation of Sam McGee
    BY ROBERT W. SERVICE
    My dad had seen a few things and was a bit theatric at times and a bit of a drinker. Had an appreciation for the love from a blue sky after the scorn of long days under heavy skies.

    These words are in my psyche and they seem to bubble up in times of need or sometimes jubilation. When the last embers give up their light, I have heard these poems drift down with the wind. If I am with others, I will echo them.






    Another tale from the Yukon:

    If you're up against a bruiser and you're getting knocked about --

    Grin.

    If you're feeling pretty groggy, and you're licked beyond a doubt --

    Grin.

    Don't let him see you're funking, let him know with every clout,
    Though your face is battered to a pulp, your blooming heart is stout;
    Just stand upon your pins until the beggar knocks you out --

    And grin.

    This life's a bally battle, and the same advice holds true

    Of grin.

    If you're up against it badly, then it's only one on you,

    So grin.

    If the future's black as thunder, don't let people see you're blue;
    Just cultivate a cast-iron smile of joy the whole day through;
    If they call you "Little Sunshine", wish that THEY'D no troubles, too --

    You may -- grin.

    Rise up in the morning with the will that, smooth or rough,

    You'll grin.

    Sink to sleep at midnight, and although you're feeling tough,

    Yet grin.

    There's nothing gained by whining, and you're not that kind of stuff;
    You're a fighter from away back, and you WON'T take a rebuff;
    Your trouble is that you don't know when you have had enough --

    Don't give in.

    If Fate should down you, just get up and take another cuff;
    You may bank on it that there is no philosophy like bluff,

    And grin.

    -Robert Service
    Education must be the answer, we've tried ignorance and it doesn't work!

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    The Guest House

    This being human is a guest house.
    Every morning a new arrival.

    A joy, a depression, a meanness,
    some momentary awareness comes
    as an unexpected visitor.

    Welcome and entertain them all!
    Even if they're a crowd of sorrows,
    who violently sweep your house
    empty of its furniture,
    still, treat each guest honorably.
    He may be clearing you out
    for some new delight.

    The dark thought, the shame, the malice,
    meet them at the door laughing,
    and invite them in.

    Be grateful for whoever comes,
    because each has been sent
    as a guide from beyond.


    ~ Rumi ~
    Something about the wrinkle in your forehead tells me there's a fit about to get thrown
    And I never hear a single word you say when you tell me not to have my fun
    It's the same old shit that I ain't gonna take off anyone.
    and I never had a shortage of people tryin' to warn me about the dangers I pose to myself.

    Patterson Hood of the DBT's

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    Rearmament

    These grand and fatal movements toward death: the grandeur of the mass
    Makes pity a fool, the tearing pity
    For the atoms of the mass, the persons, the victims, makes it seem monstrous
    To admire the tragic beauty they build.
    It is beautiful as a river flowing or a slowly gathering
    Glacier on a high mountain rock-face,
    Bound to plow down a forest, or as frost in November,
    The gold and flaming death-dance for leaves,
    Or a girl in the night of her spent maidenhood, bleeding and kissing.
    I would burn my right hand in a slow fire
    To change the future … I should do foolishly. The beauty of modern
    Man is not in the persons but in the
    Disastrous rhythm, the heavy and mobile masses, the dance of the
    Dream-led masses down the dark mountain.

    Robinson Jeffers, 1935

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    If words of writ are the script that we live by, then poetry is a refinement thus, and becomes, in essence, the words that we dream and love by.

    --
    "The reason death sticks so closely to life isn't biological necessity - it's envy. Life is so beautiful that death has fallen in love with it; a jealous, possesive love that grabs at what it can." by Yann Martel from Life of Pi



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    Eeny Meeny Miney moe...

    There once was a Man from Nantucket

    Roses are Red, Violets are blue...

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    Grief is black it is made of earth
    It gets into the cracks in the eyes
    It lodges its lump in the throat
    When a man sees his brother on the ground
    He goes mad he comes running out of nowhere
    Lashing without looking and that was how COON died
    First he wounded Agamemnon
    Then he grabbed his brother's stiffened foot
    And tried to drag him home shouting
    Help for god's sake this is Iphidamas
    Someone please help but Agamemnon
    Cut off his head and that was that
    Two brothers killed on the same morning by the same man
    That was their daylight here finished
    And their long nightshift in the underworld just beginning

    The above is an extract from Alice Oswald's Memorial
    If you can't dig it, you ain't got no shovel

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    Some Canadian content for you. Best poem ever about taking a dump:

    WHEN I SAT DOWN TO PLAY THE PIANO

    He cometh forth hurriedly from his tent
    And looketh for a quiet sequestered vale
    He carrieth a roll of violet toilet tissue
    And a forerunner goeth ahead to do him honour
    Yclept a snotty-nosed Eskimo kid
    He findeth a quiet glade among great stones
    Squatteth forthwith and undoeth trousers
    Irrational Man by Wm. Barret in hand
    While the other dismisseth mosquitoes
    And beginneth the most natural of natural functions
    Buttocks balanced above the boulders
    Then
    dogs1
    Dogs2
    Dogs12
    All shapes and sizes
    All colours and religious persuasion
    A plague of dogs rushing in
    Having been attracted by the philosophical climate
    And being wishful to learn about existential dogs
    And denial of the self with regard to bitches
    But let’s call a spade a shovel
    Therefore there I am I am I think that is
    Surrounded by a dozen dozen fierce Eskimo dogs
    With an inexplicable (to me) appetite
    For human excrement
    Dear Ann Landers
    What would you do?
    Dear Galloping Gourmet
    What would you do
    in a case like this?
    Well I’ll tell you
    NOT A DAMN THING
    You just squat there cursing hopelessly
    While the kid throws stones
    And tries to keep them off and out from under
    As a big black husky dashes in
    Swift as an enemy submarine
    White teeth snapping at the anus
    I shriek
    and shriek
    (the kid laughs)
    And hold onto my pants
    sans dignity
    sans intellect
    sans Wm. Barrett
    and damn near sans anus
    Stand firm little Eskimo kid
    it giveth candy if I had any
    it giveth a dime in lieu of same
    STAND FIRM
    Oh avatar of Olympian excellence
    Noble Eskimo youth do your stuff
    Zeus in the Arctic dog pound
    Montcalm at Quebec
    Leonidas at Thermopylae
    Custer’s last stand at Little Big Horn
    “KEEP THEM DAMN DOGS OFF
    YOU MISERABLE LITTLE BRAT”

    Afterwards
    Achilles retreateth without honour
    unzippered and sullen
    and sulketh in his tent till next time appointed
    his anus shrinketh
    he escheweth all forms of laxative and physick meanwhile
    and prayeth for constipation
    addresseth himself to the Eskimo brat miscalled
    “Lo tho I walk thru the valley of
    The shadowy kennels
    In the land of permanent ice cream
    I will fear no huskies
    For thou art with me
    And slingeth thy stones forever and ever
    Thou veritable David
    Amen”

    PS: Next time I’m gonna take a gun

    Al Purdy
    "... Enjoy yourselves, keep your brain in your head and your head firmly attached to your body, the body active and alive, and I promise you this much: I promise you this one sweet victory over our enemies, over those deskbound people with their hearts in a safe deposit box and their eyes hypnotized by desk calculators. I promise you this: you will outlive the bastards." – Edward Abbey

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    For you frequent fliers, or anyone who's gone thru Customs, some damn good prose from our friend David Whyte...




    Arrivals

    Imagine the confines of a long grey corridor
    just before immigration at Washington Dulles
    airport. Imagine two Ethiopian women amid
    a sea of familiar international plastic blandness,
    entering America for the first time. Think of
    their undulating multi-colored turbans raised
    atop graceful heads, transforming us,
    a grey line of travelers behind them, into followers
    and mendicants, mere drab, impatient, moneyed
    and perplexed attendants to their bright,
    excited, chattered arrival.

    Imagine a sharp plexi-gass turn left and suddenly
    before them, in biblical astonishment, like a vertical
    red sea churning, like the waters barring Moses from
    The Promised Land, like Jacob standing before the ladder,
    a moving escalator, a mode of rising, a form of ascension,
    a way to go up they'd never seen before, its steel grey
    interlocking invitation on and up to who knows what,
    bringing them and everyone behind them, to a bemused,
    complete, and utter standstill.

    So that you saw it for the first time as they saw it
    and for what it was, a grated river of lifting steel,
    an involuntary, moving ascension into who knows what.
    An incredible surprise. And you knew, even through
    your tiredness, why it made them raise their hands
    to their mouths, why it made them give low breathy
    screams of surprise and delighted terror. You saw it
    as they saw it, a staircase of invisible interlocking
    beckoning hands asking them to rise up
    independent of their history, their legs or their wills.
    And we stopped as we knew we had to now
    and watched the first delighted be-turbaned
    woman put a sandaled foot on the flat grey
    plain at the foot of the moving stair and sure
    enough quickly withdraw it with a strangled scream,
    leaving her sandal to ascend strangely without her
    into heaven, into America, into her new life.

    Then, holding her friend away, who tried to grab
    her, to save her, to hold her back, who pointed
    and shouted, telling her not to risk herself,
    not to be foolish, she silently watched her shoe,
    that willful child, running ahead, its sole intent
    to enter the country oblivious to visas and immigration,
    above the need for a job, uncaring of healthcare,
    pointing toward some horizon she had never dreamt,
    intent on leaving only its winged footprint
    for her to follow, like a comet's tail, like an omen
    of necessity, like a signaled courage, like an uncaring
    invitation, to make her entrance with sould and style.

    Because she looked up at this orphaned, onward
    messenger with her eyes ablaze, threw off the panicked
    clamboring arms of her friend, raised her chin
    in noble profile, and with all that other hurrying
    clamor of the world behind her, with a busy,
    unknowing, corporate crowd at her back and questions
    beginning to be asked out loud, she lifted her arms,
    clapped her hands, threw back her head and with
    a queenly unbidden grace, strode on to the ascending
    heaven bound steel like a newly struck film star,
    singing the old, high pitched song her children
    would hear when she told the story again.

    And as her friend below sang,
    applauded, danced on the spot
    and ululated her companion's arrival,
    we stood there behind her,
    transfixed, travel weary,
    and crammed into the corridor
    like extras from some
    miraculous scene in the Bible.

    While
    she ascended,
    her arms straight out,
    wide eyed and singing.
    Into America.

    -- David Whyte
    from River Flow
    © 2007 Many Rivers Press
    Something about the wrinkle in your forehead tells me there's a fit about to get thrown
    And I never hear a single word you say when you tell me not to have my fun
    It's the same old shit that I ain't gonna take off anyone.
    and I never had a shortage of people tryin' to warn me about the dangers I pose to myself.

    Patterson Hood of the DBT's

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    Robert Frost died on this day in 1963, this poem is one of my favorites.


    The Road Not Taken

    BY ROBERT FROST
    Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
    And sorry I could not travel both
    And be one traveler, long I stood
    And looked down one as far as I could
    To where it bent in the undergrowth;

    Then took the other, as just as fair,
    And having perhaps the better claim,
    Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
    Though as for that the passing there
    Had worn them really about the same,

    And both that morning equally lay
    In leaves no step had trodden black.
    Oh, I kept the first for another day!
    Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
    I doubted if I should ever come back.

    I shall be telling this with a sigh
    Somewhere ages and ages hence:
    Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
    I took the one less traveled by,
    And that has made all the difference.

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    Don’t ever get the idea I am a poet; you can see me
    at the racetrack any day half drunk
    betting quarters, sidewheelers and straight thoroughs,
    but let me tell you, there are some women there
    who go where the money goes, and sometimes when you
    look at these whores these onehundreddollar whores
    you wonder sometimes if nature isn’t playing a joke
    dealing out so much breast and ass and the way
    it’s all hung together, you look and you look and
    you look and you can’t believe it; there are ordinary women
    and then there is something else that wants to make you
    tear up paintings and break albums of Beethoven
    across the back of the john; anyhow, the season
    was dragging and the big boys were getting busted,
    all the non-pros, the producers, the cameraman,
    the pushers of Mary, the fur salesman, the owners
    themselves, and Saint Louie was running this day:
    a sidewheeler that broke when he got in close;
    he ran with his head down and was mean and ugly
    and 35 to 1, and I put a ten down on him.
    the driver broke him wide
    took him out by the fence where he’d be alone
    even if he had to travel four times as far,
    and that’s the way he went it
    all the way by the outer fence
    traveling two miles in one
    and he won like he was mad as hell
    and he wasn’t even tired,
    and the biggest blonde of all
    all ass and breast, hardly anything else
    went to the payoff window with me.


    that night I couldn’t destroy her
    although the springs shot sparks
    and they pounded on the walls.
    later she sat there in her slip
    drinking Old Grandad
    and she said
    what’s a guy like you doing
    living in a dump like this?
    and I said
    I’m a poet


    and she threw back her beautiful head and laughed.


    you? you . . . a poet?


    I guess you’re right, I said, I guess you’re right.


    but still she looked good to me, she still looked good,
    and all thanks to an ugly horse
    who wrote this poem.
    Charles Bukowski

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    I have always liked this one, and it flashes through my head when I pause or take a breather. Vacation, or realize I’ve been slacking a bit in life or otherwise…..

    Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening

    Whose woods these are I think I know.
    His house is in the village though;
    He will not see me stopping here
    To watch his woods fill up with snow.

    My little horse must think it queer
    To stop without a farmhouse near
    Between the woods and frozen lake
    The darkest evening of the year.

    He gives his harness bells a shake
    To ask if there is some mistake.
    The only other sound's the sweep
    Of easy wind and downy flake.

    The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
    But I have promises to keep,
    And miles to go before I sleep,
    And miles to go before I sleep.
    focus.

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