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01-17-2014, 11:01 AM #1
Launching in 3....2...
Just re-launched my website. Feedback appreciated. And if anyone needs help with their digital media presence or video production, let's chat.
http://jackmorris.mePeople shooting ski areas should be sued.
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01-17-2014, 11:41 AM #2Registered User
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You need an editor to be taken seriously. In the minute I spent viewing just your homepage I saw spelling and grammatical errors
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01-17-2014, 11:57 AM #3
You're a masshole?
I was able to move around easily...thought it was pretty functional. But I'm a media/web jong!
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01-17-2014, 03:59 PM #4
Overall I think the site looks nice. Clean and functional.
A couple things struck me as odd:
The "View My Work" button right below the video at the top of the home page does nothing more than scroll the page down just a little bit. Seems redundant.
At the bottom of each page you have that footer that contains "About Me" "Follow Me" and "Contact Me." Struck me as "me, me, me" if you know what I mean.
That and, on your Resume page you have the Contact link at the top, a separate "Contact Me" sidebar on the right near the top and the "Contact Me" section in the footer. All of that on the same page seems, well, desperate?
But what do I know? It's been over 20 years since I've taken any graphic design or user interface classes....Some will fall in love with life and drink it from a fountain that is pouring like an avalanche coming down the mountain...
"I enjoy skinny skiing, bullfights on acid..." - Lacy Underalls
The problems we face will not be solved by the minds that created them.
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01-18-2014, 09:29 AM #5
Thanks for the feedback Willie. Very helpful.
People shooting ski areas should be sued.
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01-18-2014, 02:30 PM #6Formerly someone else!
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"I am a digital media expert specializing in web strategies,
editorial content, and online video like the one above."
I'm a total "media" jong and found this a bit overwhelming . . . like saying "I'm an expert skier" . . . maybe something like "I am a digital media specialist in the field of . . . " - seems less 'back slapping' . . . just sayin' . . .
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01-18-2014, 03:23 PM #7Registered User
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Well, at least you fixed one error.
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01-18-2014, 06:26 PM #8Funky But Chic
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You were a good pitcher?
but not HOF?
check yo pms yo
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