Results 1 to 18 of 18
  1. #1
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    Location
    Vancouver
    Posts
    119

    website critique

    I'm hoping to get your opinions on the website I just recently got up and running. Any critique you have on the photos, or the design itself of the site would be very much appreciated. I've had some great critique from this board so please don't hold back. Thanks everyone

    http://www.allisoncano.com

  2. #2
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    On a genuine ol' fashioned authentic steam powered aereoplane
    Posts
    16,868

  3. #3
    Join Date
    Mar 2007
    Location
    Hyperspace!
    Posts
    1,372
    Looks good. What did you use to build it?

  4. #4
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Location
    Denver
    Posts
    2,837
    Clean design, loads quick, you just need more images!
    Last edited by dipstik; 10-02-2008 at 12:30 PM.

  5. #5
    Join Date
    Feb 2005
    Posts
    19,341
    I get a voodoo scrollbar on the rhs of the bio page.
    Is it radix panax notoginseng? - splat
    This is like hanging yourself but the rope breaks. - DTM
    Dude Listen to mtm. He's a marriage counselor at burning man. - subtle plague

  6. #6
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    NOLA
    Posts
    1,776
    ^^ same here about the voodoo scrollbar - and +1 to the clean design! you don't do much post processing, eh? the images look clean out of the camera. personally i find that works great for photojournalism, but it prevents a lot of the pictures from really having the wow factor. but the raw material looks great and i'd say a bunch of the images could really get there with a simple vignette or an increase in contrast/vibrance, etc. my .02
    Hail Ullr

  7. #7
    Join Date
    Dec 2006
    Location
    crown of the continent
    Posts
    13,947
    i like the first page, with a lot of color contrasted with the b/w.
    bet there's a great story about the Calgary bike cop and the woman, super shot.
    love the intensity on the chair basketball players' faces.
    +2 to the clean design, would love to see more images on there, good shootin!!!!!!!
    Something about the wrinkle in your forehead tells me there's a fit about to get thrown
    And I never hear a single word you say when you tell me not to have my fun
    It's the same old shit that I ain't gonna take off anyone.
    and I never had a shortage of people tryin' to warn me about the dangers I pose to myself.

    Patterson Hood of the DBT's

  8. #8
    Join Date
    Oct 2007
    Location
    Fort Collins Colorado
    Posts
    72
    Splash pages are old news and an annoyance to many - pretty much an additional click... for what? I would remove it, when the user goes to the url you should put them on the page you get after you hit enter on that first page.
    Only bad decisions from here on out.

  9. #9
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    Location
    Vancouver
    Posts
    119
    thanks for the input. I wanted to wait and see that it wasn't just my monitor that made some of the images look like they need a bit more processing. Once I get some time I'll do a bit of work and reload them. as for the number of images, i'm still working my way through school, and I didn't want to put any up there that I wasn't really happy with, but more will come one I start getting more experience. I used qufoto to build the site, super easy, completely idiot proof with quick good results, which is key to me since i needed a good looking site up quick to get on applying for internships/practicums this year and jobs when I graduate.

  10. #10
    Join Date
    Nov 2005
    Location
    Bozeman
    Posts
    446
    Quote Originally Posted by redkal View Post
    Splash pages are old news and an annoyance to many - pretty much an additional click... for what? I would remove it, when the user goes to the url you should put them on the page you get after you hit enter on that first page.
    ehhh, i don't really care for splash pages, but in either case, I'd lose the blue/red box that borders the splash when you click it--the content loads fast enough that you don't need it.

    other than that nitpicky comment, great design. i like it.

  11. #11
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    Location
    Vancouver
    Posts
    119
    ^that's the first i've heard of a blue/red box on the splash page. wonder why that's showing up for you and not me.

  12. #12
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    Location
    Olympia, WA
    Posts
    364
    As others have said, great clean design. Nice work! Did you code everything yourself, Or start from a template?
    undergoing a phase change.

    http://awolf.me

  13. #13
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    Location
    Vancouver
    Posts
    119
    thanks. I used a web service that basically builds the site for you, all I had to do was upload the photos and choose the layout/colour scheme etc. later on when I have a bit more time, I may work with a web designer (ie: a good friend who is a web designer) and get something that's very very similar but with a few tweaks, as right now I can't upload video to the site, which I will be needing later on. but for my purposes right now, this is great.

  14. #14
    bklyn is offline who guards the guardians?
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Posts
    5,764
    Looks good!
    I'm just a simple girl trying to make my way in the universe...
    I come up hard, baby but now I'm cool I didn't make it, sugar playin' by the rules
    If you know your history, then you would know where you coming from, then you wouldn't have to ask me, who the heck do I think I am.

  15. #15
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    InDaPow, CO
    Posts
    483
    Nice site. Since nobody has said it yet... you should consider a non-flash / less use of tables design for search engine optimization purposes. Googlebot needs a way to index your site's content so you show up for the right keywords/phrases (photography, images, etc...) when people search and make sure those keywords are prominent within the text of the site.

    A website is nothing if it can't be found, just my .02

  16. #16
    Join Date
    Jul 2008
    Location
    Portland
    Posts
    2,034
    self ports??

  17. #17
    Hugh Conway Guest
    nice stuff

    the pictures in the sidebar were slow to load and there was no indication how many there were. if you weren't interested you wouldn't stick around

  18. #18
    Join Date
    Nov 2005
    Location
    Bozeman
    Posts
    446
    Quote Originally Posted by *alli* View Post
    ^that's the first i've heard of a blue/red box on the splash page. wonder why that's showing up for you and not me.
    Hmmm, that's odd. I'm running Firefox 3.0.3.

    Looks like it is coming from your css

    This is the class:

    img {
    border:medium none;
    }

    And when I remove that class, I see the same thing as when I click through the splash.

    As I said, really a minor detail and might be unique to my system. I wouldn't worry about it. Awesome site! Very well done.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •