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07-09-2006, 04:00 PM #1
Please critique my website and all your wildest dreams will come true
Hey folks, Sportzshot's new website is up and running. I would like to know what everyone likes, dislikes, and how user-friendly it is. I'm really serious, this isn't just a cheap ploy at spamming... I have another thread for that.
Please let me know what you think... especially any problems or errors you might encounter. I'm really interested in knowing if you run into any errors with the drop-down menu system and the way the picture links open up(the technology is dubbed "thickbox").
I already know the links to the shopping cart aren't working (the store is still under construction) but everything else should be up 100%
In your reply's please let me know what browser you are using... very important. Your help is greatly appreciated and for you cooperation every attempt will be made to make all your wildest dreams come true... eventually and within a 66.6666% degree of accuracy and we are not responsible if you should accidentally get someone elses gender specific wildest dream.
http://www.sportzshot.com
Thanks all
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07-09-2006, 04:40 PM #2
Just a little thing - maybe I'm just blind. It'd be nice to have some samples vids up...
edgDo you realize that you've just posted an admission of ignorance so breathtaking that it disqualifies you from commenting on any political or economic threads from here on out?
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07-09-2006, 08:47 PM #3
Yes, a video page will most definitely be added as soon as possible. I felt the videos from my old site needed to be re-edited and updated to compliment the the new site. Plus I need a video guy. I have tons of footage.
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07-09-2006, 09:07 PM #4
At the top of the page the white lettering on top of the dotted light grey background sort of gets lost.
Other than that, it looks good and seems to load quickly.
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07-09-2006, 09:33 PM #5Originally Posted by MonkeyMan
Interested in trading a cam for some editing? I might know a guy....
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07-09-2006, 09:38 PM #6Originally Posted by bcrider
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07-09-2006, 09:47 PM #7
Just looking at a few pages, there are some spelling mistakes ("away" for "a way", and stuff like that). Also... there is an overreliance on... the ellipsis...
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07-09-2006, 10:05 PM #8Originally Posted by MonkeyMan
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07-09-2006, 10:23 PM #9Originally Posted by Steven S. Dallas
But a person who uses such big words probably already knows that. If that's not what you're talking about please simplify cause I'm Utarded.
Bcrider... yes, lets see what you got. Do you need a server to upload to?
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07-09-2006, 10:33 PM #10
Nice site MonkeyMan.I do agree with Vets though that you should go darker on top.Looks like a winner to me but I`m Utarded also.
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07-09-2006, 11:01 PM #11
How the hell are you gonna explain the naked twins in my bed to my wife? HUH?
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07-09-2006, 11:11 PM #12glocal
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Originally Posted by edg
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07-09-2006, 11:45 PM #13Originally Posted by splat
Tippster - just tell her it's a package deal and you're willing to share.
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07-10-2006, 06:29 AM #14
Good site, easy to navigate, cool pics and nice quickview on you items.
Have fun or get hurt bad. "MFT" A.K.A. Dr. Doom
There are but three true sports--bullfighting, mountain climbing, and motor-racing. The rest are merely games. "Ernest Hemingway"
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07-10-2006, 09:05 AM #15
very nice, i like the clean look and everything loads up fast.
A couple little things I saw:
http://www.sportzshot.com/compare.php - Seeing as everything but the helmet cam and the price are the same, isnt the comparison kinda irrelevent? Its a good way to show what is included in each package, but maybe a "included in each package is..." and pictures of each item? Also on the same page you have capitals on the chart titles towards the top, but they go lowercase towards the bottom (on the left margin of the chart).
Some of the descriptions at the top of the pages (first paragraph below the title) drag on a little and repeat itself ie. http://www.sportzshot.com/contact.php and on the compare chart page.Last edited by taynton; 07-10-2006 at 09:07 AM.
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07-10-2006, 12:26 PM #16Originally Posted by splatQuando paramucho mi amore de felice carathon.
Mundo paparazzi mi amore cicce verdi parasol.
Questo abrigado tantamucho que canite carousel.
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07-10-2006, 06:13 PM #17
Thanks for all the positive reviews everyone.
Taynton - yes the compare packages page is quite redundant right now but the plan is to have another 5 or so different models available. It has been noted.
Thanks for pointing out the other mistakes and the repeated statement on the contact page. Ya that's quite redundant.
It's good to hear it's loading quick for everyone... a certain code monkey will be glad to hear that.
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